Ietls writing - Day 10

T thấy nhiều thằng khi viết khi nt để cái chữ well này phía trc. Nó có ý nghĩa là gì vậy m
Một dạng câu cảm thán. Ý là "Chà" hoặc là "ồ", clgt. Kiểu vậy.
What's up Xammer!

I have stopped at the day 27 in my Nofap process. What I realize is that Nofap is great for those who are addicted to porn, not for me.

So, looking back at my recent goal, I decide to create this topic to track my record on learning Ielts writing.

One of the reasons I want to make my progress public here is to encourage xammers to wake your asses and study the language with me. Furthermore, getting commented from others makes me feel quite connected.

Let's get fucking started.

P/S: I gradually update my writing later on.
Well done tml!. However, in my point of view, watching porn is having some advantages those are good for your mentor health.

Here we go with some good benefits of watching porn and fap fap that you can enjoy during spare time.

First of all, nevertheless it's supposed that watching porn is to release Dopamine that make you feel like walking on the heaven. The dopamine is a necessary chemical which will pump into your nervous system to make your brain working with 100% power.

Secondly, by watching porn and fap fap and releasing your sperm, you are going to reduce your lustfully feeling whenever you see the fucking sexy girls are walking around you.

In conclusion, you should continue your fap fap daily in order to keep your mentor health in stability condition. And you are able to use your brain with 100% fully power after fap fap.

:))=))
 
Một dạng câu cảm thán. Ý là "Chà" hoặc là "ồ", clgt. Kiểu vậy.

Well done tml!. However, in my point of view, watching porn is having some advantages those are good for your mentor health.

Here we go with some good benefits of watching porn and fap fap that you can enjoy during spare time.

First of all, nevertheless it's supposed that watching porn is to release Dopamine that make you feel like walking on the heaven. The dopamine is a necessary chemical which will pump into your nervous system to make your brain working with 100% power.

Secondly, by watching porn and fap fap and releasing your sperm, you are going to reduce your lustfully feeling whenever you see the fucking sexy girls are walking around you.

In conclusion, you should continue your fap fap daily in order to keep your mentor health in stability condition. And you are able to use your brain with 100% fully power after fap fap.

:))=))
Well done my friend! Your arguments peak my desire to touch my balls and start jerking off.
 
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The chart shows the number of international visitors of five areas from 1990 to 2005.

Overall, the number of international visitors had the tendency to increase over the period. Europe was often the most visited area while Africa and Middle East took the least proportion of total tourists share.

In 1990, Europe attracted over 280 million visitors from all over the globe. The area was among the best choices of people due to its old architectural buildings, as well as well-preserved natural landscape. America was the second popular area with 80.5 million tourists and followed by Asia and the pacific with about 60.2 million. Africa and Middle East shared the least amount of international visitors, with only 18.2 and 9.8 million respectively.

In the next 15 years, while Europe still maintained its position, Asia and the pacific quickly took over the second most attractive area and reached 135.8 million tourists in 2005. America, in the other hand, did not show any improvement in tourist attractions. This probably due to the fact that Asia and the pacific had the advantage over America as most of the countries in this area were still considered as third world countries, so the tourism cost was much more affordable for global travellers. Additionally, in America, especially the US and Canada, most of its budget was saved for researching and developing advanced technology, so financial spending for tourism attraction was likely to be cut off.
tao sửa lại tí nha

The chart depicts the number of international visitors in five regions between 1990 and 2005.

In general, there was a consistent upward trend in the number of international visitors during this period. Europe emerged as the most frequently visited region, while Africa and the Middle East attracted the smallest proportion of global tourists.

In 1990, Europe drew in over 280 million visitors from around the world, making it a top choice due to its historic architectural landmarks and well-preserved natural landscapes. America ranked as the second most popular destination with 80.5 million tourists, followed closely by Asia and the Pacific region, which welcomed approximately 60.2 million visitors. Africa and the Middle East received the fewest international visitors, registering only 18.2 million and 9.8 million, respectively.

Over the next 15 years, Europe maintained its leading position, while Asia and the Pacific region rapidly rose to become the second most attractive destination, attracting 135.8 million tourists by 2005. In contrast, America did not witness a significant increase in tourist numbers. This can be attributed to the advantage held by Asia and the Pacific region, where many countries were still considered as developing nations, resulting in more affordable tourism costs for global travelers. Additionally, in America, particularly in the US and Canada, a substantial portion of the budget was allocated to research and the development of advanced technology, potentially leading to reduced financial investment in tourism attractions.
 
I don't know how to help you guys develop your speaking skills from the ground up, cause for me it was a journey full of struggles. In other words, it was not a fair trade - thousands of time and efforts for only one tiny part of fluent speaking skills.

However, if you are at the level where you can explain what you think, just need a little more time to find the right words, you should try to think in English. This method not only helps you to speak more fluently but also trains your mind to understand English conversation more easily.
 
tao sửa lại tí nha

The chart depicts the number of international visitors in five regions between 1990 and 2005.

In general, there was a consistent upward trend in the number of international visitors during this period. Europe emerged as the most frequently visited region, while Africa and the Middle East attracted the smallest proportion of global tourists.

In 1990, Europe drew in over 280 million visitors from around the world, making it a top choice due to its historic architectural landmarks and well-preserved natural landscapes. America ranked as the second most popular destination with 80.5 million tourists, followed closely by Asia and the Pacific region, which welcomed approximately 60.2 million visitors. Africa and the Middle East received the fewest international visitors, registering only 18.2 million and 9.8 million, respectively.

Over the next 15 years, Europe maintained its leading position, while Asia and the Pacific region rapidly rose to become the second most attractive destination, attracting 135.8 million tourists by 2005. In contrast, America did not witness a significant increase in tourist numbers. This can be attributed to the advantage held by Asia and the Pacific region, where many countries were still considered as developing nations, resulting in more affordable tourism costs for global travelers. Additionally, in America, particularly in the US and Canada, a substantial portion of the budget was allocated to research and the development of advanced technology, potentially leading to reduced financial investment in tourism attractions.
Great job dude! Your word choice is so fucking goooood. Hope to get more of your correcting essays.

However, you should eliminate the parts where I put stupid extra information (those in bold) as these points will decrease your band.
 
Great job dude! Your word choice is so fucking goooood. Hope to get more of your correcting essays.

However, you should eliminate the parts where I put stupid extra information (those in bold) as these points will decrease your band.
Certainly, I am capable of assisting you with either Task 1 or Task 2. Kindly furnish me with the precise content or text you wish to have reviewed and enhanced, and I will gladly offer my assistance.
 
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The diagram demonstrates the whole process of turning cheese from raw materials to consumable products.

Overall, the process can be divided into two main stages: making raw cheese and adding flavour.

In the first stage, there are four main steps. First, raw milk and bacteria are stored together in a container with tenzyme, which is called acidification. After the chemical interaction happens, raw milk is solidified into curds. Cheese makers will cut these curds into smaller pieces, which will later be heated until they all get drained. The final product of this stage is cheese in the form of liquid.

In the second stage, the liquid will be put through many steps and be ready for the end consumers. Salt is added into the cheese to give it slight flavor. Then, cheese makers will shape the salty liquid using a shaping machine and wait for two months. After that fermentation, cheese is eventually ready to be packaged and delivered to the stores.

@horus @suchawanderer @xamvner234 @TatHuan
 
T20807.png


The diagram demonstrates the whole process of turning cheese from raw materials to consumable products.

Overall, the process can be divided into two main stages: making raw cheese and adding flavour.

In the first stage, there are four main steps. First, raw milk and bacteria are stored together in a container with tenzyme, which is called acidification. After the chemical interaction happens, raw milk is solidified into curds. Cheese makers will cut these curds into smaller pieces, which will later be heated until they all get drained. The final product of this stage is cheese in the form of liquid.

In the second stage, the liquid will be put through many steps and be ready for the end consumers. Salt is added into the cheese to give it slight flavor. Then, cheese makers will shape the salty liquid using a shaping machine and wait for two months. After that fermentation, cheese is eventually ready to be packaged and delivered to the stores.

@horus @suchawanderer @xamvner234 @TatHuan
here you go tml

The diagram illustrates the comprehensive process of transforming raw materials into consumable cheese products.

Overall, this process can be divided into two primary stages: the production of raw cheese and the infusion of flavor.

In the initial stage, there are four key steps. Firstly, raw milk and bacteria are combined in a container with an tenzyme, a process known as acidification. After the chemical reaction takes place, the raw milk solidifies into curds. Cheese makers then cut these curds into smaller pieces, which are subsequently heated until they are fully drained. The ultimate outcome of this stage is cheese in liquid form.

In the second stage, the liquid undergoes several intricate steps to become ready for consumers. Salt is introduced into the cheese to impart a delicate flavor. Subsequently, cheese makers employ a shaping machine to mold the saline liquid, which is then allowed to mature for two months. Following this fermentation period, the cheese is ultimately prepared for packaging and delivery to stores.
 
T20807.png


The diagram demonstrates the whole process of turning cheese from raw materials to consumable products.

Overall, the process can be divided into two main stages: making raw cheese and adding flavour.

In the first stage, there are four main steps. First, raw milk and bacteria are stored together in a container with tenzyme, which is called acidification. After the chemical interaction happens, raw milk is solidified into curds. Cheese makers will cut these curds into smaller pieces, which will later be heated until they all get drained. The final product of this stage is cheese in the form of liquid.

In the second stage, the liquid will be put through many steps and be ready for the end consumers. Salt is added into the cheese to give it slight flavor. Then, cheese makers will shape the salty liquid using a shaping machine and wait for two months. After that fermentation, cheese is eventually ready to be packaged and delivered to the stores.

@horus @suchawanderer @xamvner234 @TatHuan
viết khá tốt đoá m.. còn vài lổi diễn đạt với ngử pháp như t thấy nek..

"which is call acidification" -> First, in the acidification process, raw milk and bacteria...
"Cheese makers will cut..." -> Then the curds are cut into smaller pieces, ... until they are all drained.
"In the second stage, the liquid continues to be processed through..."
"to give it slight flavor" -> bõ đi
"will shape the salty liquid using a shaping machine..." -> use a machine to shape the cheese and wait for it to be fermented in two months. After that, the cheese is...
 
here you go tml

The diagram illustrates the comprehensive process of transforming raw materials into consumable cheese products.

Overall, this process can be divided into two primary stages: the production of raw cheese and the infusion of flavor.

In the initial stage, there are four key steps. Firstly, raw milk and bacteria are combined in a container with an tenzyme, a process known as acidification. After the chemical reaction takes place, the raw milk solidifies into curds. Cheese makers then cut these curds into smaller pieces, which are subsequently heated until they are fully drained. The ultimate outcome of this stage is cheese in liquid form.

In the second stage, the liquid undergoes several intricate steps to become ready for consumers. Salt is introduced into the cheese to impart a delicate flavor. Subsequently, cheese makers employ a shaping machine to mold the saline liquid, which is then allowed to mature for two months. Following this fermentation period, the cheese is ultimately prepared for packaging and delivery to stores.
Tml này xài nhiều từ hay vậy. Subsequent mày dùng nghĩa là gì vậy?
 
Could you give me some advanced topics in technology or society?
Nè làm đi, mai tao sửa cho: Examine the repercussions of swift urbanization on prevailing social frameworks and cultural identities within today's society. Analyze the ways in which the transition from rural to urban settings has exerted influence on both communities and individuals.
 
The charts below show the performance of a bus company in terms of punctuality, both actual and target (what actually happened compared to what the company was trying to achieve), and the number of complaints and passengers.

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The graphs demonstrate the performance of a transportation company regarding to the percentage of services arriving on time and the number of complaints received from passengers between 1999 and 2003.

In overview, the company gradually decreased its target over the period and ultimately reached its goal in 2003. In contrast, the service received more complaints from passengers.

In terms of measuring on-time arriving services, in 1999, the firm nearly achieved its target with 85% of total buses arriving on time compared to the target of 86%. However, the performance experienced a significant drop next year, to its lowest point of 82%. Afterwards, the firm constantly lowered its target from 86% in 2000 to 84.5% in 2003. With these adjustments, the company eventually meet its target in 2003, with approximately 85% of total buses on track compared to the goal of 84.5%.

On the other hand, the number of complaints received had increased constantly over the period. In 1999, only 70 per thousand passengers were not satisfied with the services provided. By the end of 2003, the company had received 120 complaints over a thousand customers served, experienced an increase of 70%.

@horus @xamvner234 @suchawanderer @TatHuan
 
The charts below show the performance of a bus company in terms of punctuality, both actual and target (what actually happened compared to what the company was trying to achieve), and the number of complaints and passengers.


The graphs demonstrate the performance of a transportation company regarding to the percentage of services arriving on time and the number of complaints received from passengers between 1999 and 2003.

In overview, the company gradually decreased its target over the period and ultimately reached its goal in 2003. In contrast, the service received more complaints from passengers.

In terms of measuring on-time arriving services, in 1999, the firm nearly achieved its target with 85% of total buses arriving on time compared to the target of 86%. However, the performance experienced a significant drop next year, to its lowest point of 82%. Afterwards, the firm constantly lowered its target from 86% in 2000 to 84.5% in 2003. With these adjustments, the company eventually meet its target in 2003, with approximately 85% of total buses on track compared to the goal of 84.5%.

On the other hand, the number of complaints received had increased constantly over the period. In 1999, only 70 per thousand passengers were not satisfied with the services provided. By the end of 2003, the company had received 120 complaints over a thousand customers served, experienced an increase of 70%.
1/ t k nghĩ là có to, nếu có thì là regard to
2/ viết đảo lại như đầu câu đc k nhỉ?
3/ quá khứ chứ nhỉ
4/ thỉnh thoảng t cũng hay viết kiểu này nhưng có thể bỏ đi k nhỉ
 
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